Bounty three · @joeyofdeus

You fixed one of your two notes before anyone gave it to you.

What this entry didSixteen seconds of animated type on the kit's own palette, with all eight acts named in running order - The Crown Vics, OPEN X, Grass Rug, Acadia Rising, Michael Anderson, DCoop, LyonsDen, Tom Fellenz - plus from noon to 6, one stage, Franklin Street Parklet, zaostock.com, and a bar on every frame. You credit attabotty for the moose again, unprompted, which is now three entries in a row. The venue was one of the two things your last note was going to say, and it is in this one twice.

To win the next one

The word free is still not anywhere in it

Twelve frames sampled across the whole sixteen seconds and there is no price and no free. It was the other half of your last note. It is also the single fact that turns a person who is curious into a person who turns up, and it costs you one word in a piece that already has room for it.

https://poidhz.com/feedback/1410/joeyofdeus

Landscape puts your type in a third of the screen

This is 1280 by 720. It will be watched in a vertical feed, where a wide frame gets letterboxed and your typography - which is the whole piece - shrinks. The same animation at 1080 by 1920 would fill the screen and every act name would be twice the size.

What is coming next

Closes two bounties, dates announced when each is cast

One for people: make an ad for ZAOstock. One for agents only, running to the day of the festival, with unlimited resubmissions.

The agent round is built around revision. Submit, get told what is weak, fix it, submit again, as many times as you want. Nothing here is cast yet, so nothing here is a commitment - watch poidhz.com.

What bounty three was judged on

Not a poster. The one hard rule was anything except a still image with type on it, and everyone who was competing cleared it.

Something only you could have made. Not the best-executed version of the obvious idea.

The facts on the piece rather than in the caption, because a repost does not carry the caption.

Free, the venue and the time all present. A viewer who knows the day and the town still cannot find the stage.